first, you would like to put on there iMac then you press there gap on there iMac then you right dawn student with no password and then your on there iMac
second, you go on safari right down hwb and then right down your password and then go on j2blog and right down how to go on a iMac
there is some spelling mistakes and some of it did not make sense but other than that good job
no photos need capital letters
aleesha you have tried very hard on your and it is good but you have a couple of spelling mistakes and you should add more pictures and demonstrate more percifcly